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December 31st, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor
With only 20 reviews to choose from, this was rather harder to do this year. I also do not count magazines and I read 3 books by the same author, 2 by another, so my choices were rather limited. And, believe it or not, I did try to avoid repeating. I could not. I couldn’t even decide on only one, either.
The best book I read in 2007 is actually 3 of them. If anybody reading my reviews hasn’t read a Steven Erikson book by now, I should probably quit doing this, as I’m obviously not accomplishing a thing! Here goes:

Please read these (in series order, of course).

If for no other reason than that I can stop
sounding like a one-man fanatical fan of Erikson books.

I hope you had a great reading year -
here’s to another one ahead of us!

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December 20th, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor

My first commissioned piece of art – the cover of my anthology for
Coming 1 March 2008
Thanks Johnney!
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December 20th, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor

The Return of the Sword

Terrific cover art from Johnney Perkins for my first anthology!

Coming 1 March 2008 from Flashing Swords Press!

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December 15th, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor

For those who may not know, I am the Fantasy Acquisitions Editor for Staffs & Starships Magazine , the Anthology Editor for Flashing Swords Press, and the Managing Editor of The Custer-Hawk Gazette. The following is a collection of my musings on being an editor, most specifically in relation to the acquisition of material.

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Acquisitions. The possession of things new, things desirable. Gains. Publishers crave them. Agents seek them. Writers strive for them. Readers buy them. What is this object of their common desire and who is it that delivers relief from each of these not so disparate needs? It is the stories that unite them and the editors who choose those stories that free them. The stories we choose bring satisfaction to the publishers (temporary though it may be); discovery to the agents; success to the authors; entertainment to the readers. As the linchpins of the relationship, we want those acquisitions too, raising the question: What exactly is acquisitions editing?

 

A valid query, as its answer sets the tone for every publication there is. Easily answered, though perhaps not so easily met, its answer remains simple. Acquisitions editing is not only the desire, it is the duty to acquire publishable material. Not readable material – publishable.

Our editorial goal is not to send rejections. Not to find fault, destroy dreams, or mount writer’s heads on our den walls like the prey of a big-game hunter. We are tasked with selecting from among the submissions we receive the highest quality material that meets the defined needs of whatever target market our employer chose. We are not critics despite being required to be critical. How terrible and dreary such a career would be, to regularly find reason to tear down the creations of others. Anton Ego, food critic in Ratatouille, sums it up best at movie’s end when he says the work of critics is of less import than that of the persons they scrutinize.

So what do we fearsome editors truly want to acquire? We lead the eternal quest for the words that sell issues of our publications. The words that sell issues. The words that sell.

The ultimate responsibility of all editors, it is the acquisition editors who most specifically bear this solemn charge. It is we who choose the stories placed before the line editors, the copy editors, the senior editors, the managing editors, the editors ad nauseam. None of these others exist without the acquisitions editor putting product before their eyes. Small press, large press, one person or many, every publication has someone who wears the hat of Acquisitions Editor at some point in the acceptance and publication of tales. Even in the one-person press, the copy editor and managing editor hats don’t want the acquisitions hat wasting their time.

Identifying the good acquisitions editors becomes the challenge for all involved. Who determines what sets such an editor apart from his peers, what elevates his ability in story and author selection? Target audience and target labor pool, of course. I believe the subscribers and submitters establish this through observation of how well an editor:

  1. Adheres to the publication’s stated aims as evidenced by a competence to choose (gain) those stories closest to that ideal;
  2. Identifies with those chosen (acquired) stories, for if nothing else, he should be judged by the old maxim that by association are we known.

There can be no better measures of these characteristics than the continued submissions of those who write and the growing number of subscriptions by those who pay.

Yet is it necessary to identify these editors?

Again, it is through the efforts of writers and readers alike and to their further benefit to do so, for a third characteristic of the good acquisitions editor is a direct result of the previous two: the success of his publication as determined, not by the simple number of subscribers, but by the number of renewal subscriptions. If a publication’s target audience believes the selections editor consistently acquires stories that deliver what the publication promises, they renew. If the acquisitions editor believes that the stories he chooses are direct reflections of him when scrutinized by the squinting eyes of writers and readers above the barrels of that narrowly defined double-bore shotgun, he will be careful to associate only with the best of what he is offered. All of which creates a self-perpetuating cycle of quality acquisitions and publication.

No matter what, an editor cannot become larger than the product he represents. No editor can dictate taste or define a genre; not even I. If I attempt to do either, I elevate myself above the press, above the writers, above the readers. The focus then shifts from the target audience to me. To an editor who has forgotten the components of a successful publication. To an editor who no longer serves my publication. To an editor whose entity has begun to fail.

In order to avoid such arrogance and remain focused on the publication’s mission of providing good acquisitions, the following qualities must be cultivated:

  • Vision. The capability to see my publication’s potential to fruition while working within the confines of my reality; seeing the possibilities inherent in the work of certain authors and continuously seeking those special talents, mentoring them as possible;
  • Determination. The desire to always strive toward that potential and always honor a personal commitment to product excellence;
  • Patience. Not settling for lesser works simply to meet deadlines or fill counts. Not only finding lone gems buried between long periods of unpublishable reading, but waiting for them;
  • Reliability. Creating strong levels of trust between editor and audience.

Certainly there are more, but these suffice to serve as cornerstones of the foundation each publication must be built upon to become and remain successful. True, an editor can no more be held responsible for the ultimate success of his publication’s marketing and distribution plans than the janitor (often the same person in small press ownership). Even excellently executed plans cannot continuously carry a false or faulty product. Maybe in other fields, but not in literary endeavors. The percentage of the population that reads for entertainment is not very large to begin with, and market share is the acquisition most desired by all. Regularly delivering what is promised establishes reputation – something every acquisitions editor must be cognizant of. Reputation brings readers; more readers increases market share.

This thing called reputation does not come easily; rather, a good reputation does not. Consistently selecting – acquiring – only the highest quality stories that best meet both the defined targets of my publication and my personal expectations of association forces me to do distasteful things. Such as rejecting a friend’s story. Such as holding out hope that a story will eventually meet our guidelines and persisting in reading it until I discover that link – only to miserably fail. Such as rejecting a story that I personally enjoyed but doesn’t meet our criteria. Such as trying to offer as much help as I am capable of only to have a disappointed author lash back in anger.

An editor, like anyone else, can never please everyone. Many involved in the process of acquiring publishable material (authors, publishers, and editors) do not understand it is not the job of an editor to do so. There are only three opinions editors should respect, all of them proffered by those who have authority to hold editors accountable – the target audience; the boss; and the editor himself (the latter two, at times, being one and the same). While I list these in order of perceived importance, I suggest the best way for an editor to serve these interests is by pleasing himself first. Doing so within the proper perspective as already defined pleases the target audience, pleases the boss. Outside this proper perspective, pleasing oneself foremost becomes an exercise in bias, an end to edification.

What is an acquisition? It is a robust word packaging nouns like desire, possession, and perception with powerful adverbs such as here and now and future and imposing adjectives like impressive, beautiful, and inspiring. It is a formal word signifying the attainment of something distinct worthy to be gained.

Distinctions within the literary fields most worthy to be gained, most worthy to be possessed, consist of acceptance, publication, payment, consumption and recognition. Such are the literary acquisitions. Each of us yearns for them – it’s the acquisitions editors who satisfy our cravings.~

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December 13th, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor

Subterranean Press is da bomb.

They’ve already hooked up with Steven Erikson - the author of the last few years for me – with Gardens of the Moon coming out early 2008. I can only dream of this set though, as the 10 books, at their lowest cost, would run me $1250 minimum – an amount I could never (EVER) convince the spouse I just had to invest in books. Despite their quality, beauty, desirability . . . ahhhh.

And now Subterranean has announced plans for the books of the father of Sword & Sorcery! Kull, Kane, Conan . . . will my torment never end?! At least there is the possibility (though remote) that I could afford a few of these. Then again, I did just purchase most of the recently released Del Rey series that was itself nicely done.

Well, whether I can afford them or not, I highly recommend you visit the Subterranean site and search for your favorite authors. Oh, bring a towel, for if you find them, you’ll not be able to control the drooling.

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December 13th, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor

I am pleased to announce Salvatore has returned to form. Well, mostly. Outside the now-no-longer-expected-to-be-of-much-value-and-actually-becoming-quite-dreary-to-read diary entries/journaling/monologues of Drizzt beginning each new part. Outside those, this is a terrific renewal of the story of the world’s most famous drow . . . and if you aren’t quite sure what that is, then you best stop reading here and start reading Homeland, the (true) opening book of Salvatore’s greatest character’s series. After a deplorable mid-book in “The Sellswords Trilogy,” I was concerned Salvatore had succumbed to the lure of the fast buck. Yet he returned with somewhat of a vengeance and ended that series on a higher note. He’s begun “Traditions” (his latest series) with a bang. Literally.

A rather stunning opening scene in The Orc King has Drizzt attacking and maiming . . . dwarves and an elf and a human. It takes but a moment to notice he is not killing them though – even when sorely pressed by those not hesitating in their attempts to kill him. Yet once the explanation for this behavior is provided through other’s dialogue and Drizzt’s familiarly-pensive-though-admittedly-less-whiny-than-has-been-the-new-norm monologue (sense a trend here?), it is less believable than it could have been. Analytically, the reasons proffered are plausible; improbable if looked at in any other manner. At the very least, this leads one further simply to satisfy curiosity’s sake alone. At the most, it prompts one on determine once and for all if Salvatore has officially sold out. I can assure you he has not.

The story is an exploration of dreams and self; a determination of what matters, where one sees oneself. Familiar faces resurface, old pains and heartaches are rediscovered, allegiances and honor are reevaluated. Wulfgar seeks a return to the simple barbaric life where he feels he truly belongs – free, as he says, of political correctness and intrigue; Catti-brie needs to find herself, see herself as a woman – a human woman; Bruenor looks for change in past glories – not for himself per se, but to ever find them, bring them back as he himself was twice ‘brought back by Moradin’ (from Icewind Dale and from death itself); Regis dreams of no longer having to do what he believes friends must do – yet he won’t think twice about doing otherwise. Drizzt? Drizzt is seeking balance, just as he has been for awhile now – and not truly seeing it. Despite what he learns throughout this tale, either. Yet he forges on, keeps on keeping on, as the saying goes.

There are a few moments of note in the tale: one of blatant favoritism (where an obviously author-favorite character does NOT suffer the doom-and-gloom heavily advertised before a certain event – in fact, what damage does occur is minimal and immediately forgotten despite the enormous ramifications it should/could have had, remaining conveniently absent from the rest of the story) and one of awesome description (the fight between two gargantuan characters on pages 322-336 is one helluva fight! Definitely one of the best ever described in writing and one I sure would have liked to see – but from a long ways away!).

This is a book of searching, and because that is its theme it is easy to get caught up in the searches, the peering and prying and poking and prodding and pondering . . . leading one to not anticipate what is found by story’s end. It is a melancholy ending, as one forgets the hints presented in the prologue – until just short of forcibly being reminded of them in the very brief but equally – No! More – stunning epilogue. This story searches both the past and the future in ways unforeseen and thus surprising to followers of this long-winded series. I look forward to returning to the series late in 2008, if for no other reason than to read Salvatore’s terrific fight scenes, but in actuality for much more than that. Words from the text itself (ironically, from Drizzt’s comments at the onset of Part 3) sum up the real reason though:

“Our lives take on a routine, and then we bemoan that routine. Predictability,it seems, is a double-edged blade of comfort and boredom. We long for it, we build it, and when we find it, we reject it. Because while change is not always growth, growth is always rooted in change. A finished person, like a finished house, is a static thing. Pleasant, perhaps, or beautiful or admirable, but not for long exciting.”

If nothing else, Salvatore’s writing is exactly that: exciting. Despite a few snafus and the mostly no longer entertaining monologues. I know they’ve become a staple of the series, but, really, Bob, isn’t there another way to incorporate all that information in the stories? Would I recommend The Orc King by R. A. Salvatore to my friends? Yes.
You can also find this review on the SFReader.com Speculative Fiction Book Reviews and More.

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December 01st, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor

Seems publishing is the only category left amongst my topics to be addressed.  I’m new to this game, so this is a category that may not see much from me just yet.  I hear, however, that publishing is on the decline.  The publishing of short fiction, that is.  Novel-length fiction gets churned out at something on the pace of 10,000+ books per month.  Scratch that number as far too small.  I see that as of 2005, America published 172,000 books – 34,000 less than first-place Britain, an 18% decline for the U.S. versus a 28% increase for our English brethren.  To save everyone the trouble, the last country on the list (at #118) is Niger, where 5 books were published back in 1991.

It seems magazines are dying.  Fiction more-so than non, but most non-niche magazines are following their newspaper kin to early graves.  Some say early, some say, well, they don’t care enough to say a thing!  I haven’t missed newspapers in years, having given up on the disgusting things long ago.  Magazines, though . . . magazines and I are a bit more friendly but I did not grow up in a family that had them lying about much.  By the time I got hands on them myself, I was more interested in novels and never grew attached to short fiction, so magazines and I have never created a close friendship.  Which is rather interesting, as I am now an editor for three of them.

As for publishing – I’m not worried about its survival just yet.  Oh, it’s definitely going through changes, adjusting (sometimes ever so slowly) to technology and the modern era of speed, ease and, well, the lack of education of the masses.  I’m not prepared to make any predictions any time soon, but I do know that there are many authors and small presses out there steadily publishing books and fighting for survival against the behemoths of the publishing world.

They are – often – quietly producing large bodies of works that lack the gigantic marketing budgets or the financial ability to suffer loss-leaders as a normal course of business, thus reducing their market impact to minuscule levels while in no way diminishing their readers enjoyment.  Their struggle, of course, is daily competing for readers entertainment money.  Actually, that is the struggle they wishedthey had!  Daily is the dream, the ideal – their struggles are simply month-to-month.  Yet they find ways to survive, occasionally flourish, even rarely grow larger.

Publishing will find ways to survive.  Maybe not in any format we are right now used to – there is electronic paper now, electronic readers, electronic books – but somewhere, somehow, someone will be finding stories to edit, stories to buy, and stories to sell.  Shoot, even Amazon.com sells short fiction!  Tailored, advertisement free, easily digestible form – perhaps this is the future of all short fiction.

Right here, right now, though, I’m in the process of putting together a great little thing called an anthology and it’s filled with exciting tales of adventure, intrigue, betrayal, battle, heroics, surprise, and drama.  It might not be an answer to the woes of the publishing industry – but it will be the answer to your reading doldrums.

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December 01st, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor

CARPRACS are my observations on topics covered in this blog as compared to or initiated by the cars about me in my daily travels as a driver.  I’m actually borrowing this idea from E. E. Knight’s blog post about Dialog Structure wherein he uses automobiles, directions of travel, and accidents to describe the possibilities of story dialogue.  I loved the article and ever since reading it, I haven’t been able to not think along writing and story lines every time I’m driving.

Hence the LFSGOOD post.  And several more I’ve up my sleeve or lying about the place, just cluttering things up until I get them posted.  I think this will be a weekly event, one practical example of writing know-how as provided by the cars (or operators thereof) I see about me.

CARPRACS.  I hope you enjoy them as much as I believe I’ll enjoy thinking of them.

Edit 11-1-08: OK, it wasn’t one per week, as originally advertised. I do have about a dozen more scraps of paper here that need to be typed up, though :)

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November 29th, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor

So says a license plate I saw tonight. While stopped in rush hour traffic. ;)

And so it really is. But are my communication skills? As demonstrated, spelling isn’t always important for communication to occur – sometimes it is not integral to the transfer of concepts or exchanges of awareness. Atop the alternator aide, sum times its the own lee weigh too make cents of things.

The wrong word, used in the wrong place or at the wrong time, can often destroy all of the best placed most appropriate words belaying it. Or bracketing it. Or is it buttering it? See, spelling isn’t always all it’s cracked up to be. Word choice, however, is.

The person in that car in front of me could have said LFSOCKS / LFSUX / LIFSCKS. Yet – while perhaps appropriate for that place, that moment, that situation – life doesn’t really suck. Despite the stop-and-go traffic. The driver equally could have claimed SXSGOOD / JASGOOD / IMGOOD – all of which communicate quite different concepts and emotions with only the middle choice being of any real value. :)

It’s about now you’re wondering what my point is, about now you’re considering skipping the remainder of this post and moving on to the next blog or site you have to catch up on.  Go ahead.  You have my permission.  Why?  Well, for one thing, you don’t need to read what I’m saying.  Either you already have the skill to choose the correct word at the correct moment, or you’ve learned through trial and error that choosing the correct word is always the correct thing to do.  Or could it be that choosing the correct thing to do is always the correct word?  I’m not sure now.

Regardless, either you already know who important word choice is and don’t need me to remind you, or you don’t think it warrants all this attention, instead insisting hat whatever word you choose is the correct word where and when and how you use it.  Something like ‘So I have spoken, so it shall be.’

Those of you still reading at this point are the one who haven’t learned but probably also haven’t thought much of it.  Either that, or you’re the readers who’ve enjoyed my humor thus far and can’t bear to leave without finding the rest of it.  To you I say ‘LFSGOOD, ain’t it!?’

Simple words, multiple words, complex words; multiple complex words.  Terse, direct, active are all much better choices.  Strong, clear – crisply clear – emphatic, ‘doing’ words.  When Christ on the cross yelled/screamed/roared/stated/howled out at the cusp/apex/summit/acme of his sacrifice/replacement/offering/yielding and declared himself a worthy substitute to bear/sustain/handle/tolerate the punishment for all mankind’s sins/evils/transgressions/violations/wrongs he didn’t say, “It is over.”

He said, “It is finished.”

Teddy Roosevelt did not say, “Stride/strut/amble/march quietly/secretly/smoothly/tentatively and shoulder/bring/take/pack a significant/monstrous/ample/heavy rod/staff/pole/branch.”

He said, “Walk softly and carry a big stick.”

Clear, concise, concrete communication.  My writing needs it just as much as my speech does.  Confusing someone I’m speaking to is one thing, for I am there to dig myself out of the hole I put myself in; confusing my reader is quite another, for who will be there to rescue him/her?

Speak/write exactly what you want to say.  One of the quickest ways to distance and disinterest someone to whom you’re speaking (verbally or in writing matters not) is to not be clear, to not be active, to not be personal, to not be exact.  If I can convey an understanding of all these ingredients of language be it in my story’s dialogue, narrative, expositions, description, or action . . . it matters not if I say, “Wow! Right now is great!” or if I say LFSGOOD!

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November 21st, 2007 | Author: von Darkmoor

Isn’t it fun to learn a new word! I think so. I especially enjoy the chance to explore its origins. This is actually one of the ways I create names for people and places and whatever else needs naming in my stories. I recently subscribed to the Absolute Write Newsletter “PUGS Pointers” and in the latest issue dated November 16, 2007, the Letter from the Editor began with a ‘Welcome, Absolute Writers! A gallimaufry, today.’

Editor-in-chief MacAllister Stone proceeded to do just that, covering the WGA writers’ strike, the holidays, and even a solicitation for holiday-licious spec fic works for Coyote Wild. I’ve yet to read most of the newsletter, partly because I got caught up in playing with my new word.

Here’s all the help the wonderful dictionary.com was able to provide:

Dictionary.com Unabridged (v 1.1)Cite This SourceShare This

gal·li·mau·fry [gal-uh-maw-free] Pronunciation KeyShow IPA Pronunciation

–noun, plural -fries. Chiefly Literary.

1. a hodgepodge; jumble; confused medley.
2. a ragout or hash.

 


[Origin: 1545–55; < MF galimafree kind of sauce or stew, prob. a conflation of galer to amuse oneself (see gallant) and Picard dial. mafrer to gorge oneself (< MD moffelen to eat, nosh)]

Dictionary.com Unabridged (v 1.1)
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gal·li·mau·fry (gāl’ə-mô’frē) Pronunciation Key
n. pl. gal·li·mau·fries
A jumble; a hodgepodge.


[French galimafrée, from Old French galimafree, sauce, ragout : probably galer, to make merry; see gallant + mafrer, to gorge oneself (from Middle Dutch moffelen, to open one's mouth wide, of imitative origin).]
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gallimaufry

“a medley,” 1551, from Fr. galimafrée “hash, ragout,” origin unknown, perhaps from O.Fr. galer “to make merry, live well” + O.N.Fr. mafrer “to eat much,” from M.Du. maffelen. Others see the proper name Maufré.

Online Etymology Dictionary, © 2001 Douglas Harper

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So gallimaufry means to happily gorge oneself upon the sauce of life. I can dig that. I’m doing that right now. :)

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